Jenny Penny ([info]weirdlyyours) wrote,
@ 2008-09-06 14:09:00
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Entry tags:drabble, es21, yukimitsu

[ES21] Like Water
Title: Like Water
Series/Pairings: Eyeshield 21; Yukimitsu
Notes: For [info]31_days: September 6 / there's an art to this. In the Happiness for Now universe.
Summary: Football isn't as easy as it looks.

Like Water

There are a few things he realizes when he begins to play football. One is that some modicum of athleticism is necessary. Two is that the ball is remarkably difficult to hold onto. No matter how much he had been looking forward to carrying the football, it slips from his fingers again and again because he isn't fast enough or strong enough or skilled enough to protect it.

He practices for hours more than anyone else, and he still can't protect the ball.

He sweats and bleeds and bruises, and he still can't protect the ball.

He runs across America, and he still can't protect the ball.

Logically, he knows that Hiruma makes the right decision when he cuts Yukimitsu from the regular team, and replaces him with two players from the basketball team instead. But still, it makes him wonder if his situation is hopeless after all.

He has never wanted something so badly. He has never worked so hard for something. But the magic addition of hard work is doing nothing to produce his desired results.

Yukimitsu clutches the football tightly in his hands and closes his eyes. There are tears on his cheeks and despair on his tongue.




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[info]smakn
2008-09-06 09:56 pm UTC (link)
I can't remember who this character is, but you write this very nicely. How dreams don't always become reality.

Nice work.

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[info]weirdlyyours
2008-09-06 11:43 pm UTC (link)
Unfortunately, effort isn't always enough. :( Thank you.

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[info]skelevitt
2008-09-07 01:29 am UTC (link)
Aw, now I actually feel sorry for Yukimitsu because of your other piece, lol! Poor Yukimitsu! (And what a bastard Hiruma is, lol!)

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[info]weirdlyyours
2008-09-07 05:40 pm UTC (link)
Haha, Hiruma does what he must to win. And Yukimitsu eventually perseveres.

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[info]livingtea
2008-09-07 03:52 am UTC (link)
<3. oh yukimitsu. i always feel like crying when i see how hard he tries but he simply can't do it. like that part during the death march. when he falls down oh. my "heart" or whatever part of my brain that controls my emotions (hm i should know this... oops.) just. just. i dunno. oh yukimitsu.

thank you for writing. <3.

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[info]livingtea
2008-09-07 03:52 am UTC (link)
also. lovely fic.

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[info]weirdlyyours
2008-09-07 05:41 pm UTC (link)
But he's so hard-working. Even though he falls down, he doubles back and runs forward once more. I admire and envy his tenacity. Thank you for reading. ♥

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[info]dayofcaligula
2008-09-07 12:52 pm UTC (link)
Oh, this mood can be clearly felt in him before the game with Nagas. Still good, still good.

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[info]weirdlyyours
2008-09-07 05:39 pm UTC (link)
My heart broke for him when he was crying after he was cut. :((

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[info]cerridwene
2008-09-08 12:11 am UTC (link)
Oh this is just beautiful, you captured it so well. <3

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[info]weirdlyyours
2008-09-08 02:20 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much. ♥

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[info]abster226
2008-09-08 03:46 am UTC (link)
awww jenny you make me sad. in a good way. sorry it took me forever to read this.

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[info]weirdlyyours
2008-09-08 02:21 pm UTC (link)
Does this mean you'll check out ES21 now? :D :D

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[info]yokainomiko
2008-09-25 01:28 am UTC (link)
Yukimitsu.... He's such a great character. Eyeshield 21 has such detailed characters at times it's awesome!

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[info]weirdlyyours
2008-09-25 02:38 am UTC (link)
Poor Yukimitsu is so often forgotten that I thought I would give him some love.

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[info]yokainomiko
2008-09-25 03:02 am UTC (link)
He needs it! Have you read F.A. Star Hawk's story mentioning him? It made my day :D

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